So yesterday morning, I had my feedback from my tutor and colleagues and they told me a various amount of things wrong with my blog. They told me that my blog was very Beige looking. So later that afternoon I had one of my colleagues Patti to help me change the way my blog is shown such as the background. I finally changed the bamboo in the background for something more simpler and easier for the public to read. Also one of the comments was, why the bamboo? Well I said I didn't really know but as I couldn't really work the settings on this blog I couldn't use any of my own photos because there size was too large. Another way too improve my writing I need to reflect more on my work, however I thought I had but in fact I hadn't at all really. So from now on I'll start to reflect more. 

If you like the changes on my blog do not hesitate to comment and say why or tell me what I could improve on.